In my opinion, after this revision, the manuscript can be accepted for publication on NHESS.
Below I list just a few supplementary indications for minor editing (mainly relative to typos).
Page 1 - line 2: “landslidestriggered”.
line 8: “seimsic”.
Page 3 - line 25; “onlyif”.
Page 4 - line 16: Put a comma after “dip-slip faults”.
Page 5 - lines 18-20: Replying to my comment relative to Page 4 - lines 29-30 of the first submission, the authors declare to have modified this sentence to make it clearer, rewriting
“Note that Ctopo cannot be computed as the fraction of As within which slopes are less than 10°. This is because local flats will impede landsliding and change the landslide density locally, but not necessarily reduce the envelope containing all earthquake-induced landslides, that typically defines Ad.”
However, this change was not reported in the revised version of the manuscript.
Page 6 - line 23: Close bracket is missing after “(Table 1”.
- line 26: “a limited areas”
Page 8 - line 11-12: “(Figure 2,3”.
Page 12 - line 33: “groun”. |