The manuscript has gained a lot in clarity, but part of the narrative is still confusing and does not seem to hold. In particular, from section 3.1 to 3.2, then 3.2 to 3.3, the years where the described events start changes. I suggest changes in the enclosed document in order to clarify the chronology of the events and verify that the proposed mechanisms are valid.
Note also that some comments from the previous round of review have not been addressed, despite the authors saying that they had done so in the Author's response. |